People please check out my beat...

[Serbian]

Guys this is my third beat,the first one that actually sound like one...Its not so good but I'm counting on you to tell me what you think,what I did wrong so I can improve.....I dont sample other music all of it is played by me....Feedback please guys,thank you....

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/1/serbian_music.htm

[Serbian]

C'mon people,listen to it...posto some feedback,help me improve....

[The_Truth101]

Your link don't works

[Timmeeeehh]

Get the claps out of the beat, they're really annoying, put instead some hihats.
Let the snare hit harder.
Put the instruments with the volume a bit lower.
Put the sweet, amusing pianoparts away.

Keep on doing it!

[Serbian]

Thanks Obsessed 'n Shit,I apreciate it very much.....
Anyone els?

[Suga Foot]

I say leave the claps in.  It's a cool beat.  I like it.


Check out my beat:

http://www.dubcnn.com/connect/index.php?topic=86827.0

[Serbian]

Thanks,I'll see what I'll do with them claps....I'll check out your beat now....
People I got two beats now....please check them out....Its all me played,nothing sampled (tell me if I should continue play:)...
thanks

[Timmeeeehh]

If it's possible, you should always stick with play melodies and things yourself. Sampling and such things are the more easy way in my opinion.

[Serbian]

I totaly agre with you