Author Topic: Green City "You aint no killa" Real Niggaz" Just tryna Make it" LA aint Changed&  (Read 241 times)

TuSlic

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check out green city ent music at www.myspace.com/greencity and drop comments and i'll return the favor
 

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2nd beat was good.  I like the tryna make it.  The rest of the beats...eh...Honestly..I wouldn't buy it.  I like the 2nd beat...for reason..you sound like kanyne west..not saying that you bitting off him..but it sounds like him...
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My suggestion: get better beats...the dark beats are old and trited.  Try upbeat..and different.
Lyric-wise....it wasn't too bad..
try cleanin' lil more on lyrics.
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which track you talkin bout that sound like kanye west?  I wasnt on Just tryna make it, and the rest of the tape is more diverse with the beats, ima up some more tracks in a few weeks.
 

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which track you talkin bout that sound like kanye west?  I wasnt on Just tryna make it, and the rest of the tape is more diverse with the beats, ima up some more tracks in a few weeks.
well..whoever was on that track.
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which verse?
 

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it's the 2nd verse before the chorus...it's sounded low at that point.
THe chorus overlaps the 2nd verse, so I couldn't hear it clearly what he saying.
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