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Don't fuck the hood up (short version)
« on: April 11, 2003, 07:01:31 AM »
here are my lyrics
I really need feedback

There was this boy that was fucking high
Fucked up the big boy, kille by a drive-by
1 shot in the head, 2 shots in the chest
His family wished he had a bullet-proof fest
The police said the case was gang-related
Them motherfuckers will be forever hated
The hood want the killer dead, that’s revenge
Cribs spelling the name in the c-walk dance

Chorus: fuck the hood up, and you are dead
             They will shoot you, a bullet true your head
             fuck the hood up, and you are dead
             They will shoot you, a bullet true your head

Gangsters ain’t shootin to stop a nigga they shootin to kill
Look there is the motherfucker (gun shots)

The police is coming quick jump in the car
Yo muthafucka we are ready for war
Now drive the ghetto were they won’t come
Even when they call the reforsmance on
We have to get rid of the evidence
Throw it away and drive to my residence
Now this is a block with motherfuckin real g’s
That means gangster screamin fuck tha police

Chorus: fuck the hood up, and you are dead
             They will shoot you, a bullet true your head
             fuck the hood up, and you are dead
             They will shoot you, a bullet true your head

On the blocks they think rap is fantastic
That why we made another hood classic
This song is representin the real gangsta’s
Not the made ones you motherfucking wankstas
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So don’t step up to someone you don’t know
Or you will get killed                      fa sho

Chorus: fuck the hood up, and you are dead
             They will shoot you, a bullet true your head
             fuck the hood up, and you are dead
             They will shoot you, a bullet true your head

Chorus: fuck the hood up, and you are dead
             They will shoot you, a bullet true your head
             fuck the hood up, and you are dead
             They will shoot you, a bullet true your head



i will make a longer version soon
Me and my homie also made a beat for it
I will write & record the longer version soon
need feedback









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Re:Don't fuck the hood up (short version)
« Reply #1 on: April 11, 2003, 07:13:45 AM »
it was ok, wouldent really sound dope in audio because theres no real flow to it, but its rhymes and is cool  The chorus is wack as fuck tho.
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Re:Don't fuck the hood up (short version)
« Reply #2 on: April 11, 2003, 09:21:09 AM »
The chorus goes more slow, it's like a nate dogg part
Thnx BEZ

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Re:Don't fuck the hood up (short version)
« Reply #3 on: April 11, 2003, 02:56:42 PM »
despite it bein a helluva played out topic, shit was aight. post that shit up soon man, like ta hear it
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Re:Don't fuck the hood up (short version)
« Reply #4 on: April 11, 2003, 07:39:50 PM »
it was alright, but how i read it, it was too simplistic.
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Re:Don't fuck the hood up (short version)
« Reply #5 on: April 12, 2003, 02:51:19 PM »
Quote from: Illicit aka CeeRide on April 11, 2003, 02:56:42 PM
despite it bein a helluva played out topic, shit was aight. post that shit up soon man, like ta hear it
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