here you go kid......make sure you drop by the end of the day
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I am-spittin-pain, my-shit-is-insane, suckin' a wet dick is the only time your spittin'-with-brains!!!                      1
i drop sick for wins-at this kid's expense-rip your skull open so "your-thoughts-make-sense"// (his brain wud make contact with air)      2
this little creep, is like ripped open sheep~cuz hes dissin'-with-no-guts~you'll get-your-legs-cut so when your "de-feated" you'll have to-pick-yourself-up!!!       3
i hate-to-be-rude to-expose-this-wack-dude but if will smith ever won a battle then-its-against-you!!!      4
Iam-exposing-fake-thugs with facts to-make-you-wake-up and I aint-afraid-cuzz you pull as many punches as-a-snake-does!!!!(get it a snake has no arms)         5
This kid is prolly lost-on-facts cuz-he-macks as many bitches as carrot top when-he-acts!!!           6
I'll leave you flattened with my-rhyme-pattern smack you so hard your head wud have a halo like Saturn!!!          7
If you ate sugar your rhymes wudnt get sweat I put fatsoes like you in disbelief mack though it was about food when he said biggie won the beef!!!  8
(he thinks biggie beat 2pac)

finisher:
you need to elevate cuz your rhymes are lightweight
you were destined to lose that's why I only wrote 8!!!

...vet of what?...please..

Wicked-Illness?...bitch please you a cold-at-best..
im bold-wit-text..ya against a vet wit untold-respect..
i hold the crown-still,any rook im bound-ta-kill..
past ya 1st bar,like a "Grant injury",ya verse went "down-hill"..(Grant Hill)
ya wouldnt be dope if ya were slangin-ya-verses..im bangin-wit-curses...
ya wanna chill wit tha God?..ill leave you hangin-from-churches..

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Get the picture,ya scriptures,aint hit hard..
so motherfucka i went 1 better an dropped 6 bars..

here goes :

Wicked illness:
u need to work on a lot of stuff:most ur multis aren't real ,"am-spittin-pain", "my-shit-is-insane" for example,not only does the 2nd one have more syllables BUT only the last syllable of each rhymes....so it would be easier to point out all the real multis in ya verse(not many) than to point out ya bad ones (they are the majority)plus ya multis are forced,a lot of ppl do this,they feel like they NEED to put every single multi they can think of in the verse and it doesn't make for a good verse.
ur punches are kinda weak..."you need to elevate cuz your rhymes are lightweight
you were destined to lose that’s why I only wrote 8!!!"for example ,now it's not necessarily bad in other circumstances BUT the bar limit is 5 so u went over the bar limit (i've explained why i don't like this punch in the post b4)
2/5 :sub par but keep at it and u'll get there

Mack:
flow was nice as always ,sum nice lines but u loose points because u fed of wicked illness's verse in one line "o motherfucka i went 1 better an dropped 6 bars.. ".Most ur multis were on point,
4/5


WINNER:MACK

"5bars = 10 lines"

woops!!!!ur right .i'm sorry .but mack still wins though

that whole de-feat line was mine before....DONT BITE..i have used it in a battle a long long time ago

LOL...primo should jus ghostwrite fa ppl

no offense ^^^but your the biggest dickriding faggot i ever seen......