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morbidenigma

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thoughts of a depressant...
« on: April 26, 2008, 10:56:53 AM »
whem im alone i'm crying just like baby in a cot
seems Like film scripts ive clearly lost the plot
but i don't have a role to help me achieve goals,
feelin empty and hollow, gaping holes in my soul
the pain doesnt dissapear, it stay in abundance
my mental resilience is gone, in this existence
the sorrows doesnt drowning, so should i drown
tommorow i might not be found around this town
my feelings and my fears nobody cares to ever hear
everywhere i go, i seem to get these weird stares
feeling hopeless, nobody notices the hurt in me
but the emotional agony i'm feeling is clear to see
my eyes ain't dry from sadness and unhappiness
nobodies interested to see whether i'm depressed
what i do know if i was to go and die tomorrow
You wouldn't be feeling any kind of pain or sorrow

my brow are contacted, deep thoughts show a frown
hanging my head so low, it might touch the ground
and if on the floor i saw queen elizabeth's crown
i wouldn't feel like picking up the sterling pound
i don't feel like speaking a single word to anybody
everyone thinking what happened to his personality
i think if life hurts, what does yout feel when you die
i got no reasons to smile, but many reasons to cry
if i told you that i never cried that means i've lied
so i look for any distractions to keep myslf occupied
but in this world of ours, everything seems rough
cops wanna cuff you up, every single day is tough
in time flying by, i cant seem to get rid of this pain
i try to, but it doesn't wash away like a dirty stain
will this depressing anguish ever diminish and finish
if it doesnt i might be dead like the fish in your dish
 

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Re: thoughts of a depressant...
« Reply #1 on: October 16, 2008, 08:42:03 AM »
noone likes it?
 

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Re: thoughts of a depressant...
« Reply #2 on: October 16, 2008, 09:13:39 AM »
i liked it, good lines all around.
      
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Re: thoughts of a depressant...
« Reply #3 on: October 16, 2008, 03:49:07 PM »
Dude..... there this' wonderful thing that takes all those feelings away.....
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Re: thoughts of a depressant...
« Reply #4 on: October 17, 2008, 07:55:31 AM »
thanks for the feeback ppl
 

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Re: thoughts of a depressant...
« Reply #5 on: October 17, 2008, 08:54:30 AM »
Liked it, kinda reminded me of my flow a bit.