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Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
« Reply #15 on: August 17, 2002, 03:05:34 PM »
number 2, 3 is my favorite which were gonna do a collabo on, 4 is coo, 6 is tite, over i would give u a 4.5 out of 5, its pretty good dogg make another one. pz
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Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
« Reply #16 on: August 17, 2002, 03:20:04 PM »
Yo, who wants too do a beat callabo with me? I really wanna do one...Where I lace the drums, and somone laces the intruments...Anyone up for it?
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Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
« Reply #17 on: August 17, 2002, 05:15:20 PM »
not bad ..I can never get anything good outta fruity loops .....Peace
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Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
« Reply #18 on: August 17, 2002, 06:47:36 PM »
they were aight.  for a beginer.  keep it up I guess.  If that's your thang.





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Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
« Reply #19 on: August 17, 2002, 09:11:41 PM »
Yo They are real tite 4 Acid Pro.....I think I already told U.....

And Yo sccit.....Hit me up about dat Beat Collab.....




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Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
« Reply #20 on: August 18, 2002, 03:25:18 AM »
u shouldn t use the sample from lookin at me soo often,but your beats are pretty cool so far.
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Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
« Reply #21 on: August 19, 2002, 11:07:26 AM »
aight, thanks...anyone else care too drop some feedback...which ones they liked and which they didnt?
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Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
« Reply #22 on: August 19, 2002, 06:55:00 PM »
I like the first one, but not the distorted sound that keeps going over and over

I like the second one, it just needs a better bassline, that sounds more like bass.

The third one is dope as hell, LOL.  You've got a good ear for melody, I think.  If you had a better bassline to work with though, it'd do miracles.  It probably needs to be mixed a little better, too.  You might wanna hook up with The Rev. online and have him play bass that you can mix in to it, if he's down for it.

The fourth one is pretty original, too, LOL.  Man, you're actually halfway decent, ha, with a little practice, you'll probably be alright.  It sounds like some cash money stuff, LOL.

The fifth one is good too, just sounds a little hollow, because again the bassline doesn't sound real, it sounds too synthetic.  But pretty creative for what you have.  

The sixth one is pretty creative, too.  I think you've got potential, if you had a better Synth to mess with, you'd be better off, though.  Some of the sounds just sound so fake, it's hard to do anything with them.  You need a kit with better drums, and better bass, definately.

The seventh is nice, the drums are good.  

The eigth one has a good melody, too.  
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Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
« Reply #23 on: August 19, 2002, 07:09:02 PM »
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I like the first one, but not the distorted sound that keeps going over and over

I like the second one, it just needs a better bassline, that sounds more like bass.

The third one is dope as hell, LOL.  You've got a good ear for melody, I think.  If you had a better bassline to work with though, it'd do miracles.  It probably needs to be mixed a little better, too.  You might wanna hook up with The Rev. online and have him play bass that you can mix in to it, if he's down for it.

The fourth one is pretty original, too, LOL.  Man, you're actually halfway decent, ha, with a little practice, you'll probably be alright.  It sounds like some cash money stuff, LOL.

The fifth one is good too, just sounds a little hollow, because again the bassline doesn't sound real, it sounds too synthetic.  But pretty creative for what you have.  

The sixth one is pretty creative, too.  I think you've got potential, if you had a better Synth to mess with, you'd be better off, though.  Some of the sounds just sound so fake, it's hard to do anything with them.  You need a kit with better drums, and better bass, definately.

The seventh is nice, the drums are good.  

The eigth one has a good melody, too.  





Thanks a lot man!...I appreciat that a lot...

See guys, That's exactly what I was looking for...A track by track review with good criticism...I guess people dont have time nowadays though...Thanks a lot Trauma...


Oh, and yall have too understand that I'm working with Fruity Loops...Im not looking to be a big name producer with these beats or anything...LoL...It's all in fun...I'm not gunna go out and buy real equipment for producing...I just make beats when I'm bored...Thanks again though Trauma...PeAcE
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Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
« Reply #24 on: August 21, 2002, 12:43:03 PM »
bumpin...


Sccit Mix 2 coming soon!
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