JAY AY BEEEE - U WANTED A BATTLE?! - JUST 4 A LAF!

[Rud]

WELL HERE YA GO - ITS NOT MUCH COS I WROTEIT WHILE I WAS AT WORK......

ITS ALL 4 FUN MA 'OL M8!




DAMN/
YOU SPAT THAT VERSE THE OTHA DAY/
AND ALL THE CRITICS CAME OUT TO PLAY/
YOU TOOK ALL YOUR YOUR PRAISE/
AND JUMPED ON THAT CRAZE/
BUT NOW YOU GOTTA TRY TO SEE IF IT PAYS
TO FUCK WITH THE VILLAIN/
COS YALL KNOW HE BE DRILLIN/
A TITE VERSE THAT CANT BE LYRICALLY SMASHED/
IM WATCHIN YOU TURN ROUND AND DASH/
YOUR RUNNIN FOR COVER COS OF THE RHYMES IM SPITTIN/
YOUR GIRL CALLS ME OVER AND ASKS ME TO FUCK HER CLIT-IN/
SHIT YOUR BITCH IS A FOUL ASS HO/
SO I SAY "NO SLUT ITS TIME TO GO"/
SHIT JAY AY YOUR GIRLS PUSSY'S A BUCKET/
BUT I THOUGHT 2 MY SELF 'HEY FUCK-IT'/
SO I TURN AN I PUT A GUN TO HER HEAD/
YOU COME OUT THE CORNER AND THIS IS WOT U SED/

"NO RUD DONT DO IT IM BEGGIN YOU PLEASE/
COME ON MAN IM DOWN ON MY GOD-DAMN KNEES"

HAHA, I LAUGH "YOUR MORE PATHETIC THAN JOHN CLEESE"/
WHEN HES CHOPPIN 'MANUEL' INTO PORTIONS OF THREE/
YOUR RHYMES MAY ALL FLOW WELL/
BUT ITS ALL JUST PLAIN VOCAB/
COMIN LIKE A LAZY SLOW BLACK CAB/
'WHATS THE DIFFERNCE BETWEEN ME AND YOU?'/
ABOUT 5INCH IN HEIGHT AND THE 'M62'/
HEY LISTEN UP YOU MANCUNIAN BRUMMIE/
GET THIS STRAIGHT YOUR RHYMES BRAKE LIKE COOKIES ALL CRUMBLY/
JUST LIKE MAN UNITED THEY TURNIN TO SHIT/
WHEN A BOLTON LAD COMES AND RIPS THEM TO BITS/

U SED WE SHUD HAVE A BATTLE! - WE STILL COO! - CATCH U ON MSN!

peace




*I NEED 2 USE THE 'WHATS THE DIFFERENCE BIT!' - I WASNT STEALIN RHYMES! - DRE GAVE ME PERMISSION.........LOL!*

[Hittman]

Lol.


I Wanna See  JABs Response.

[Rud]

BUMP


peace

[Jay ay Beee]

It's Rud the Villain/
never done a killing/
never done some dealing/
a motherfucker I ain't feeling/
you opened your mouth and got struck out/
cooked like an ounce/I'm ready to pounce/
flame you like molten/
cruisin' down to Bolton/
and cocking my guage/
rage is apparent/
your talent is non existant/
you're resistant/
to style mothafuccas be in denial/
that i am the greatest/
state this/
you suck a dick prick/
I got so much style/
I'm like Deniro on trial/
tell them nothing/
take the booking/
be a Goodfella/
you're Yella/
the teaboy see boy/
I erase you/
as well as amaze you/
so don't step with the tough talk/
else you'll be outlined in chalk/
you just got busted a lesson/
by the teacher preacher and I ain't confessing/
but I'm digressing shouting like DJ Clue/
my two final words are FUCK and YOU/

Lol

NOW VOTE ASSHOLES!

[bez]

jay A Beee

All I can say is fuck me

U have improved so much since I last read your shit.  That was clear improvement.  well done both of you but jay wins.

[maxi-padz]

i was nearly gonna give this to rud
jay wipped him to the floor in word play n dat shyt
but when i was readen ur work jayi couldn get tha flow of it
maybe iz jsut me
but try n make yo rhymez flow as well as rhyme
vote - jay ay bee
peace
~1~

[Hittman]

Vote - JAB

[Ant]

vote RUD

[Jay ay Beee]

I'm about as hot as Lucifer/
I earn my spot by shooting ya/
verbally and lyrically/
you're style is ancient history/
inconclusive like a mystery/
listen to me/
don't ever try this again/
stepping to me I leave you in flames/
leave you aching like migraines/
I eat you alive/
take a dive like Olympic divers/
crumpled like fivers/
hesitation causes elimination/
so don't just stand there when facing recrimination/
I'm pacing while I'm lacing/
on the edge like a ledge/
getting cut up like a hedge/
cause when you think about it I'm far too good/
cause I'm about it leave your face scarred in the mud/
my tightness is like bad weather in England/
it comes often/
might this be my land?/
yes cause you're head's poppin/
I own you and have shown you I'm better/
now I disown you and sow you like a sweater/
vendetta getter that's me/
the menacing mothafucca the Jay ay Bee/
you can't hang with me/
or take my land from me/
so don't try my style switches many ways/
I leave you infected and injected like McViegh/

Round 2 is on!