IS THIS ANY GUD?!? - I WANT A BATTLE OUT OF THIS!!

[Rud]

I been observin these rhymes for a while now/
and i reckon its time to unleash an attack/
so i say yall better watch your back/
cos things gonna change/
best keystyler title gonna get ripped 2 shreds and re-arranged/
yeah some say its crem/
others want it to be them/
but its time you all saw the lyrical talent/
revealed in a verse of incredible balance/
with good flow and tight words/
and a use of incredible verbs/
yall need to see it cud really be me/
but it'll take lots a practice/
and a repetoiure of lyrics too complex to list/
after sometime yall b so pissed/
that its took you so long to perfect the way/
your words go together like a roll in the hay/
but i set fire to the barn/
and cause unbelievable carn-/
age is not important/
neither is race, pace/
but leaving a good solid trace/
the way to ensure youll go down in history/
so come on you list with me/
the stars who have shone to show off their skills/
so amazing they've payed off all bills/
thats all im askin for - a cheque to get me out of this hole/
and regain a small amount of control/
so i can learn to direct my life and its purpose/
so be sure this/
rhyme dosent sink without a reply/
come on guys at least try/



rite - PLEASE REPLY 2 THIS RYME WITH A GUD 1!!

I RECKON IM GETTIN BETTA BUT I DUNNO!


and cause unbelievable carn-/
age is not important/

IN CASE PEOPLE DONT GET THAT LINE.............

carn- IS SO THE FLOW CONTINUES 2 MAKE TWO WORDS BUT IN A SENSE CONNECTED (CARNAGE) AND CARN (AGE IS NOT IMPORTANT)
JUST WANTED 2 CLEAR THAT UP!

peace

[maxi-padz]

dizz aint no mirage/
im hitten u with a lyrical barrage/
maxi padz iz goen skitz/
n senden yo rhymes to tha pitz/
fo weak eemce hitz/
u might as well rhyme wit a set o tittz/
im to hot to fucken fo u 2 handle/
im taken yo battle scalp for my mantle/
the whole board haz watched u get dismantled/
n rattled/
u shocked to see maxi up that top notch/
spitten sinfull plotz/
bout killen copz/
n robben shopz/
n stealen babies from they cotz/
leaven u wit big red spotz/
all ova yo white sheetz from popped blood clotz/
daz right im a certified street pharmacist/
to be exact a skitz lyricist/
rhymen fucked up thoughtz wit a twist/
dat leave yo parents pissed/
wit a flick of tha wrist/
or a flinch in my finger/
i can make the whole world refigure/
a different approach to de throne maxiz figure/
illegal weaponz stash/
verbal disease assaults leaven a rash/
taken over ur central nervous system/
killen yo nerves n stealen yo wisdom/
decomposing ur body while u r helpless/
ur cause it hopeless/
i break ur ripz from the inside n tear open ur chest/
ur jsut a lil step in my quest/
watch as my rhymez begin to manifest/
in ur mind untill i become the best/

i thought id reply cuas noone else has
iz this a serious battle??
ok everyone vote
ur rhyme was good rud
u improven a hella lot
but still amaturish in sum places
ya feel?
like sumtimes ud spit like 4 good barz
den ud spit like 6 shit ones
consistancy will come eventually
peace man
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[Hatesrats™]

Tight rhymes Rud....keep up the hot flows and eventually you'll drown all the hater's in boiling water.....

peace...Hatesrats

[Rud]

CHEERS HATES!!

U CAN HAVE A DRINK ON ME! (I KNOW U LIKE UR ALCOHOL!!)

WHO DOESN'T!!

peace