Touchy Subject - : Indecisive

[Inspectah]

 


...wanna touch her? shit try me and i'll touch you.
i'll even give you a choice, of either my fist or my shoe.
see i'da done watched you for hours, and seen how you work.
messin, an testin' my temper, as you try to charm on my turf.
i was told leave it, and just watch it all fall into place.
but i'd rather settle this infronta crew, as i gouge out ya' face.
tell me what you want like mase, coz shit aint a lucky dip.
i fight dirty ya' heard me, lost focus in those eye's where i'd spit.
you got balls, which is all leading to the re-trace of tha herb.
shit on me, behind my back, soon to find your face on the curb.
what do i say to people who try me, to me as it seems yo.
i'll have your ass onna milk carton, on the boxoffice next to finding nemo.

[Inspectah]

*BUMP* *UPPIN*

[kickz_deluxe]

first off i think your stuff got a good expression n allathat but u always use tha same scheme.
. . . a
..... rhyme on a
. . . b
..... rhyme onb
. . . c
..... rhyme on c
  .
  .
  .
even if every piece iz bout sumthin different ( or mostly bout sumthin different) it soundz very similar.
of course, theres a difference between all in audio, but nevertheless try to use different schemez.
keep good work

[Inspectah]

Thanx for the feedback, i know that i use the same style, its because after 5yrs worth i have found my ryhming scheme. i can ryme different however i choose to keep it to how i can ryhme shit. I may in the future try something different but until then.. thanx for the info.


Peace out!

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