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Rugged Monk

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haiku
« on: October 05, 2008, 01:58:07 AM »


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Re: haiku
« Reply #1 on: October 08, 2008, 11:55:39 AM »
I thought a haiku was 4, 5, 4... oh well....

interesting, but too short to mean much on a Hip-Hop message board buddy.....
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Rugged Monk

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Re: haiku
« Reply #2 on: October 08, 2008, 03:47:20 PM »
^really? 4,5,4 what? Enlighten me....
 

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Re: haiku
« Reply #3 on: October 08, 2008, 05:45:16 PM »
I *thought*..... don't quote me dude cause I might be wrong, but I think a haiku is 4,5,4.....

anybody care to verify?
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