livin 90's single verse

[Mr. O]

chorus:2x
we be living all-night-long,
sippin classics, we keep-it strong,
we repin'  ninties- till
like how we keep-it-all real.

1,2,3, and 4
we keep this old school shit and that's fo sho,
It was the highest times like the weed magazine,
knowing that my CALI is filled with substance and obscenes.
It was the era of brothers bangin through beats,
banging through streets bobbin' our heads like 64 of rap heats.
with 100 percent satisfaction guareenteed.
When we speak, we speak like excessfully.
At that time, we knew it ain't about money,
it's about quality, compare to today, ain't that funny?
Yes saaaa, we kept it raw to this day,
for my homies, we'll still represent LA.
With my boombox while sippin on O.E.
kickin by the curve, we listen to rawness of MCS.
if you listern real hard to their rhymings,
ya'll realise we going back to the 90s.

chorus: 2x
we be living all-night-long,
sippin classics, we keep-it strong,
we repin'  ninties- till
like how we keep-it-all real.

[El the Self Image]

I like the concept youngin'.....

haven't heard too many songs glorifying the 90's just yet, I'm still havin fun being an 80's baby....

I had a hard time with your rhyme scheme, and I think you should have spent more time describing what was going on around you at that time..... clothing, dances, school, etc... don't just describe what you did in the 90's, describe the 90's like an object.......

Good Shit, I look forward to your second verse....

[Mr. O]

I like the concept youngin'.....

haven't heard too many songs glorifying the 90's just yet, I'm still havin fun being an 80's baby....

I had a hard time with your rhyme scheme, and I think you should have spent more time describing what was going on around you at that time..... clothing, dances, school, etc... don't just describe what you did in the 90's, describe the 90's like an object.......

Good Shit, I look forward to your second verse....

hehe i was about to get to that part soon.  Thx brotha

[QuietTruth]

Sometimes you don't got to be a lyrical great to write somethang meaningful to ya heart, so good shit PC!

[bez]

Yeah nice concept, thought it was decent mate.