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Tecknine

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2 loves
« on: March 01, 2002, 05:36:52 PM »
Modern day diciphal , hard to find shit delightful\\
My enfurious recital, it's vital to hold the title\\
I wanna reign superior to the inferior\\
But some how my envisions don't meet the criteria\\
Persuing impossible dreams,to intervene\\
Thoughts of my queen ,burn my inner conscience like Listerine\\
Hold me tight,tell me shit's gonna be alright\\
in the night,infinite celestial bodies glowing bright\\
Be there throughout my trials and tribulations\\
Peaceful meditation through hip-hop translations\\
Love has many equasions, and simply deceitful arrangments\\
Agony while you're missin',memories of your eyes glistenin'\\
It's a mission just to get through 24-hours of livin'\\
I have my lyrical presision,hip-hop is my religion\\
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Flowmatic

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Re: 2 loves
« Reply #1 on: March 01, 2002, 05:57:41 PM »
tight lil rhyme dawg keep it up....


i like the pic tooooo its hott i got on my desk top....... loool




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Tecknine

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Re: 2 loves
« Reply #2 on: March 02, 2002, 06:16:50 AM »
uppin
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King-Suge

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Re: 2 loves
« Reply #3 on: March 04, 2002, 05:16:25 AM »
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Modern day diciphal , hard to find shit delightful\\
My enfurious recital, it's vital to hold the title\\
I wanna reign superior to the inferior\\
But some how my envisions don't meet the criteria\\
Persuing impossible dreams,to intervene\\
Thoughts of my queen ,burn my inner conscience like Listerine\\
Hold me tight,tell me shit's gonna be alright\\
in the night,infinite celestial bodies glowing bright\\
Be there throughout my trials and tribulations\\
Peaceful meditation through hip-hop translations\\
Love has many equasions, and simply deceitful arrangments\\
Agony while you're missin',memories of your eyes glistenin'\\
It's a mission just to get through 24-hours of livin'\\
I have my lyrical presision,hip-hop is my religion\\


1.5/5

Pretty weak to be honest.  Keep your head up though
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Re: 2 loves
« Reply #4 on: March 04, 2002, 05:18:03 AM »
nice
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Re: 2 loves
« Reply #5 on: March 04, 2002, 09:39:24 AM »
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1.5/5

Pretty weak to be honest.  Keep your head up though


LOL King Suge thinks hes all thatm  "mistah hard review givah"  lol punk,   1.5/5?  if that wuz true , primo wouldnt be sittin here.    
although I must say, you tried on the topic it just didnt seem like u put all your heart into it,  good effort though.  and good flow,  no abundance of multis lol.      4/5
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MsWestCoast

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Re: 2 loves
« Reply #6 on: March 04, 2002, 09:57:11 AM »
damn..that shit ain't weak..it's from tha heart..you're keepin it real dogg, good shit, keep doin it
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Tecknine

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Re: 2 loves
« Reply #7 on: March 04, 2002, 03:30:57 PM »
seeing it took me about 5 minutes to write it doesn't suprise me
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ToNe1904

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Re: 2 loves
« Reply #8 on: March 04, 2002, 03:36:19 PM »
i think i got tha BEST suggestion for u Primo. take that pic off yur post....it makes it hard for us to focus on yur rhyme. LOL  ;D
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