Author Topic: Who wants to battle Explicit? (Read 340 times)

Tha Muthafuckin Don - Explicit · « **on:** June 22, 2002, 11:40:24 AM »

So people, who wants to challenge the illest Newbie on WCC..? C'mon lets see who takes up the challenge..!?

Whoever excepts this battle, you can post your verse first, no bar limit, just spit..!

Peace -- Explicit

wonseyryder · « **Reply #1 on:** June 22, 2002, 10:14:48 PM »

:)lettin u know i like to flow,clownin around wit nowhere to go so dont let my foot kicc u on yo way out the doo,anything to say step up and say it, retreive yourself, come up quicc or im-a have u succen my mans dicc, get crazy sicc wit it; slapp u wit a double d tit, licc da clit swallow dont spit dont front or prepatrate like you dont wanna hit; im on a mission death of everyone is what im wishin

Tha Muthafuckin Don - Explicit · « **Reply #2 on:** June 24, 2002, 06:49:27 AM »

K, your verse was short, but i can handle that, you gotta make sure that it all makes sense, and that it flows well, thats my tips from other people to me... So heres my verse:

You bringin it to explicit//
Time to reveal my self to tha hole wide world, with shit that'll bust you up, and make peoples stomach erl// Get back on ya shelf, need time to perfect your ryhme, before you make a fool o your self// Exceeded the limits of a potential killer// Sniper you out from a distance with live words, that are poisonous and iller// Than you could eva imagin// Your wounds will look worser than a fatal bloody stabbin//
I gots 110% confidence, approach you with all your homies behind you, smack you so hard, with no shame or hesitance//
Leave your peeps to mourn an greeve// You'll be hangin ya head down, when you finally loose, and leave//

So get votin people..!

Peace -- Explicit

King Tech Quadafi · « **Reply #3 on:** June 26, 2002, 07:17:42 PM »

Explicit takes this easily

better structure, vocab, rhymes etc

Tha Muthafuckin Don - Explicit · « **Reply #4 on:** June 27, 2002, 01:37:22 AM »

Thanx man, keep comin with those votes..!

Peace -- Explicit

:-:Mistah Menace:-: · « **Reply #5 on:** July 31, 2002, 12:07:42 AM »

Explicit, lol, took this for deff

Peace

cud u return the vote on my battle at http://pub5.ezboard.com/fmindandbloodbattlefield.showMessage?topicID=3341.topic thannks (just click it, lol)

Political Gangsta · « **Reply #6 on:** July 31, 2002, 01:30:06 AM »

My vote= .........

Explicit gets this by the dim reaches/
Of his self-determinated flow/
That knows know equals except Beevis/
Yeah, your shit is the fuckin weakest/
Immature, middle-school grammer/
I'm iller than that faggot David Banner/
I manhandle the youth/
Dash away in my jag or my coup/
You try to be fly pushin your scooter/
I'm in a muthafuckin Lex like Luger/
Or pushin the fucking paddy wagon/
Puffin on Chronic just like that Magic Dragon/
Go eat your muthafuckin Sushi/
Your lucky that wonseyrider is a newbee/
Because you didn't deserve to win/
Now try to battle me!!!!!!!

vote- Explicit

Gay-o Felony · « **Reply #7 on:** July 31, 2002, 12:20:37 PM »

Iight... i won.. thanx for votin people... Im tha don, and my other name was Explicit, but i changed it...

~ Political Gangsta ~ stop attemptin to invoke me, when the battles ova, jus another wannabe g, labelled as a full time ~ prangsta ~

Peace -- Th@ Don a.k.a Explicit!