NEED HONEST OPINIONS PLEASE..LEFTY AND DIAMONIQUE..2 VERSES IN!

[LOCO5150]

YO WEST UP! THIS LEFT DOGG...I JUST WANT TO HEAR FROM YALL AND TELL ME WHAT YALL THINK...NO RACIST REMARKS PLEASE....IM JUST GRINDIN LIKE EVERYBODY ELSE...RESPECTS!

L-DOG


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[Slikk_J]

Well theres my info I wanted to know on Diamonique like I was asking in my other thread hahaha

Slamming beat. Good club song. Good guest in Diamonique. Lyrics can use some working on, but really, you rocking with Fingazz, you can't go wrong. Your in good hands!

[DPGC23]

ORA,
LET ME C WHASAPO

DPGC23

[LOCO5150]

Well theres my info I wanted to know on Diamonique like I was asking in my other thread hahaha

Slamming beat. Good club song. Good guest in Diamonique. Lyrics can use some working on, but really, you rocking with Fingazz, you can't go wrong. Your in good hands!

SO DO YOU THINK THE LYRICS IS TOO SIMPLE...I WAS TRYIN TO GO FOR LESS IZ MORE...YOU NOW...NIQUE KILLED IT..AND YOU RIGHT FINGAZZ IZ A MONSTER GENIUS .GIVE ME MORE FEED BACK G ON WHAT I SAID JUST KNOW?.

ORA,
LET ME C WHASAPO

DPGC23

DID YOU GET AROUND TO IT DOGGY? LET ME KNOW....ANYBODY ELSE BE REAL..I TAKE CRITICSM SO ITS ALL HOOD. IF YOU FEELIN IT..THEN STR8...IF NOT TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK IT NEEDS.

[Mr. O]

wasn't feeling it...sounded too much like lil wayne...at least the beat part...

[LOCO5150]

THE BEAT SOUNDED LIKE LIL WAYNE? WHIXCH SONG? I THOUGHT IT SOUNDS A LIL ON THE LIL JOHN TIP BUT ALRIGHT...THATS COOL THANKS FOR COMMENTING G.

[LOCO5150]

 -OHH! LOL.

[Slikk_J]

Well theres my info I wanted to know on Diamonique like I was asking in my other thread hahaha

Slamming beat. Good club song. Good guest in Diamonique. Lyrics can use some working on, but really, you rocking with Fingazz, you can't go wrong. Your in good hands!

SO DO YOU THINK THE LYRICS IS TOO SIMPLE...I WAS TRYIN TO GO FOR LESS IZ MORE...YOU NOW...NIQUE KILLED IT..AND YOU RIGHT FINGAZZ IZ A MONSTER GENIUS .GIVE ME MORE FEED BACK G ON WHAT I SAID JUST KNOW?.

ORA,
LET ME C WHASAPO

DPGC23

DID YOU GET AROUND TO IT DOGGY? LET ME KNOW....ANYBODY ELSE BE REAL..I TAKE CRITICSM SO ITS ALL HOOD. IF YOU FEELIN IT..THEN STR8...IF NOT TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK IT NEEDS.

I just gave the track another listen.

You kinda sounding like a hardcore version of Joel Ortiz, without the lyrical content.

Ok, so I see where you going, less is more, I getcha. Simplyifying the track. Its ok to dumb down the lyrics for singles and that 'cause it seems to make for better listening, and mainstream appeal is 'dumbed down' so Lyrics is ok. Its the delivery, like fits well with this club track, but shouting and sounding all hardcore and that, personally I don't know If I could listen to a whole album like this.

So this track is good.

In other words, track is cool, but delivery for the rest of your project? Are other songs you working on gonna use more word play? Do you have different flow/delivery methods to switch it up? Personally for me I like creativness and thinking outside the square, you know something different and fresh.

Hope that makes sense, and can help out?

By the way who gonna do the 3rd verse? See if you can get a Mr Criminal or someone like this if you looking for another guest.

[LOCO5150]

I GOT YOU...THANKS FOR ALL THAT.....THE ALBUM IS BANGING BUT I WOULD LIKE FOR YOU TO BE THE JUDGES OF COURSE....ITS WELL WRITTEN BUT LIKE I SAID IVE HEARD PLENTY OF SINGLES THAT DUMBED DOWN THE LYRICS AND THEY CAME OUT HARD....ITS WHAT YOU GOTTA DO SOMETIMES AND I DONT FEEL LIKE IM CHANGING MYSELF...ITS STILL ME...STREET WISE....AND I DONT SCREAM IN EVERY SONG...LOL...BUT I UNDERSTAND THAT WOULD GET ANNOYING....WHEN THE SONGS FINALLY DONE I'LL POST IT UP WITH A GOOD MIX AND ASK FOR THE TRUTH...

OVERALL I STILL WOULD LIKE MORE FEEDBACK...BUT SLIKK J THANKS FOR YOUR HONEST OPINION....AND KAYOTTIC FROM OUR GROUP THE SUSPECTS WAS GONNA BE THE 3RD VERSE...YOU CAN NEVER GO WRONG WITH FEATURES EVERYBODY KNOWS THAT. I JUST DONT KNOW IF I WANNA GO THERE....I WOULD LIKE EVERYBODY TO REALLY HEAR US AND SEE IF WE WILL STAND OUT. PERSONALLY I THINK WE WILL.

[LOCO5150]

EY SLIKK_J YOU CAN CHECK OUT MORE MUSICK HERE ON MY PAGE... http://HTTP://WWW.MYSPACE.COM/LEFTYKNUCKLES....AND HERES SOMETHING ELSE WE TRYIN FOR RADIO. LET ME KNOW.

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[Mr. O]

-OHH! LOL.

you got my drift, playa? 

[Mr. O]

I GOT YOU...THANKS FOR ALL THAT.....THE ALBUM IS BANGING BUT I WOULD LIKE FOR YOU TO BE THE JUDGES OF COURSE....ITS WELL WRITTEN BUT LIKE I SAID IVE HEARD PLENTY OF SINGLES THAT DUMBED DOWN THE LYRICS AND THEY CAME OUT HARD....ITS WHAT YOU GOTTA DO SOMETIMES AND I DONT FEEL LIKE IM CHANGING MYSELF...ITS STILL ME...STREET WISE....AND I DONT SCREAM IN EVERY SONG...LOL...BUT I UNDERSTAND THAT WOULD GET ANNOYING....WHEN THE SONGS FINALLY DONE I'LL POST IT UP WITH A GOOD MIX AND ASK FOR THE TRUTH...

OVERALL I STILL WOULD LIKE MORE FEEDBACK...BUT SLIKK J THANKS FOR YOUR HONEST OPINION....AND KAYOTTIC FROM OUR GROUP THE SUSPECTS WAS GONNA BE THE 3RD VERSE...YOU CAN NEVER GO WRONG WITH FEATURES EVERYBODY KNOWS THAT. I JUST DONT KNOW IF I WANNA GO THERE....I WOULD LIKE EVERYBODY TO REALLY HEAR US AND SEE IF WE WILL STAND OUT. PERSONALLY I THINK WE WILL.

well, you just be you..and all is gravy.

[LOCO5150]

HELL YAH...I GOT YOU G. NO DOUBT.

[ROBBS]

wut up lefty...kool track ..catchy hook knockn beat

[macadomusic]

dude this slaps. U dont want racist comments but i have to tell u man i like to hear Mexican rappers on different type of beats and this is it. Fingazz.... u really cant lose with dude. Glad to see Diamonique still doin it. I swear i was just wonderin whats up with her and he homeless nation