Illicit ~vs~ Mack 1/5 Completed, Mack wins

['Illicit']

aight: I'll set up some universal rules for all 5 battles except the one wit ToNe.

12 bars
crew votes allowed (no one will vote anyway lol)
deadlines sunday. I think we both can manage it by then, in case you or i cant, jus hollar we can settle this like some grown men lol.

any objections holla homeboy.

dont matter who spits first.

[da_notorious_mack]

aiightz here we go playah......


the kid calls me conceited~even if this verse was ya dick you cudnt beat it~//
ya dome i heat it~leave ya ass defeated~and ya profile deleted~//
just leave it~you might as well be a free agent~my spit fragrant~//
the spot Melanin once held is vacant~DA want the top spot an that blatant~//
and you hate it~ya name illicit?~ya game i kill the shit~//
cus i luv the thrill of the hit~cant believe you still with that clique~//
them 7 bars each left 11 scars~that leave 77 so you biting shatterstar~//{lmao}
you wish you hadda car~cus you lackin drive~plus you cant rap live~//
and you doing something i despise~dont front like you makin an album we all know that lies~//

['Illicit']

ay, jus lettin you know I will drop today. dont worry aight.

['Illicit']

mack tries to be like god and wants to "flow" above the clouds//
but his rhymes are mostly bitten so one less mc I worry bout//
fake an attitude of a gangsta but watch me peel this bitch's cap back//
its not jus that I'm too good for you its just that your wack!//
who ever said you could rap?, and who taught you to be a "copycat"//
that remark about my crew, prepare fah gettin dropped fah that//
I plot attacks, lyrically stomp this brat, ferociously chop ya ass//
your only opportunity of prevailing, I locked that chance//
mistake conceit with intelligence shouldnt fuck wit an mc of my eminence//
ima teach you cat a lesson and let you suffer from my capital punishment//
your my first victim of 5, mc's that bout to die, so suck step aside//
dont be scurred to try again but bring some game and a new name to the line//

[Koncept]

  both of you could do alot better
tech wise mack came with more mutis
but Ill's had better punches and a nice flow

Vote = Illicit

[King Tech Quadafi]

i gotta say that Mack took this one
when i was reading his shit, it flowed perfect man..and the disses were tite

illicit.your verse had good disses but ive seen MUCH better from u

peace

['Illicit']

1-1

uppin....yeh i know Tech, but it was the best i had to offer yesterday when i wrote it.

[Kill]

Ok, I'm coo with both of ya, so this is a honest vote

Mack:
The start was average, nuthin especially interesting and simple rhymes, not that it was wack but it was Mack average. But your spit got better with every line, plus you got quite personal and in the second part of your verse you combined ya dope flow with dope rhymes and really dropped sum heat

them 7 bars each left 11 scars~that leave 77 so you biting shatterstar~//{lmao}
you wish you hadda car~cus you lackin drive~plus you cant rap live~//
and you doing something i despise~dont front like you makin an album we all know that lies~//

Illicit:
Nice, but I've seen better from you...I'm pretty sure you could've hit Mack with sum personals like he did it to you, then you'd have made it quite hard for me to vote on this, prolly. The copycat line was the only personal and you're on a played subject there. The flow was immaculate, overall your verse was nice, but there was nuthin about it that'd really hit an opponent hard IMO

VOTE = MACK

can I get sum votes on http://www.dubcnn.com/connect/index.php?board=12;action=display;threadid=24694 pleeeze

['Illicit']

hey, no prob, thanks for the honest vote. thats how its sposed tah be

[Reef]

ima make this short and sweet.... Both verses lyriclly were dope, illicit.. Ive seen better from you homie, and mack, bringin' heat as usual.. Both had some good lines, but i think mack took this one..

[Xearo]

My vote goes to Mack.

Illicit came average...I've seen you come 3 times harder...seriously...

Mack came with the heat...nice punches and disses...

['Illicit']

aight fuck it, mack took it. its obvious I even admit it.  maybe next time we'll both come at each other with our full potential dawg. thanks for the battle. peace and thx to all who voted.

[@Ss@sSiN]

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