I need Help Writing A poem for my girl

[Dj Mex]

this is what i got so far

 My Girl

you are my girl
you mean alot to me more then the world
you are worth more to me then the biggest pearl
you make me happy when i am down
you make me smile if i have a frown
you make my day when you smile like a clown
i know you will think i really dont care
but i really like to smell your hair
but this poem is true and thats no lie
i know your tough and i know you dont cry
but let me in let me inside
lets break the down the wall
lets start today
lets do this our way.

[.:Hercy Buggz:.]

Man You Need something better than That good start though

[Kain670]

hey Dj Mex your funny

add this
"I love you like a fat kid love cake" - 50 Cent  


.:Bigg Chillah:. ~ what is it with you and nasty chicks in your profile

[P Nelson]

I think the end is better then the begining, i dont really feel the first lines

[Mickaveli_#1]

Your radiant form illuminates the faintest of fallen faces /
Cause my courage flow like warm blood, breathless as my heart races /
swallow to consume the passion consealed inside so discreet /
Forever as one, walk the highest mountain on bare feet / the ache & greif minature.... blah blah blah blah

Or you can go for the more harder type

Baby the bomb shaped so elequintly shaped and created
The sweet delight of foreplay, anticipation made it glad that you waited / gratification I got my smooth fingers passing thorugh left and right like Im dealing / astound next door as the chalk smoke from the ceiling

OR if you really wanna be sweet then.... Nah i aintgonna write a smooth sweet one this time nigga maybe next time huh

[E. J. Rizo]

Hey Chick..Do you want this DICK?
Dont you want to blow like a Hoe?
I will Drop my Drawls for you to like my Balls!
You will have a blast while i work your ass
and when it starts gettin bland start using your hands
so lets take a ride down the slip in slide as i hit it from behind
So let me empty my load on you hoe
ill even give you a buck, hey by the way Want to Fuck?

 

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ahhh i tried... LOL

[Reef]

its ok man.. jus remember poems dont have to rhyme

[Jay ay Beee]

i know you will think i really dont care
but i really like to smell your hair

Gangsta

[Mickaveli_#1]

Prolific features of authentic black magnificence / Baby boo cutey, shake u booty been wantin u eva since / licenesed to rob hearts and rip sweet couples apart / appropriate for all weather, embezzled by the start, crippled by the end.

U Want your girl to luuuuvvvvv ya?? Here we go,.,.

Steamy nights together under the sheets we playfully wrestle and tuggle, struggle through deep breaths as we research come close to huddle, like football I run the field if there's lawn / swifly yet slickly slither my hand, now that thong long gone, get my tougne warmed up as I notice your smile so I preserve / got my tougne running up and down your body never missing a curve, I slide it through the thigs, you stroke and caress make sure the balls is well packed, I lick your bumhole slide the tounge round the crack


Now she gotta luv u

[Woodrow]

I just quote Kurupt when I'm intimate with a girl...




God I'm lonely

[hector]

I just quote Kurupt when I'm intimate with a girl...




God I'm lonely

lol, get a bowl of dick bitch? lol

[DOC. da G.P.T...[METS][REX/MaB]]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH........

funny shit....keep it up....lets see more poems...

[Mickaveli_#1]

I Haven't been paid for the last 4/5 I put down on here   Im on a level where people be paying me to write to their girls. Where u think the people go after springer?? thats right -> to mickeys house

[P Nelson]

Lol I knew Kurupt would get inspire some of us, hes the best when it comes to show a girl how much u care for her

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

Damm Ho, is yur dad a terrorist? Cuz he created a BOMB/
I wanna drop it on U heavy like it's Vietnam/


Nah, but yo, If U want a real poem, hit me up on AIM: RODZILLA151 or in da PMs......I'll make a top notch 1 for U.......when U gimme her info.......