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Reef

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First ever attempt at a song
« on: June 07, 2003, 03:50:11 PM »
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/gareefamusic.htm

Recorded it this mornin... Any feedback, tips n shit would be appriciated..
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Re:First ever attempt at a song
« Reply #1 on: June 07, 2003, 05:42:57 PM »
Not Bad.  I just have a problem hearin u. You should turn up the vol on ur voice. But over all it was good.
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Re:First ever attempt at a song
« Reply #2 on: June 08, 2003, 08:26:26 AM »
thanx for the feedback homie.. Was my voice n shit ok?
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Re:First ever attempt at a song
« Reply #3 on: June 08, 2003, 11:16:28 AM »
i agree, not baddd, but TURN that voice up.
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Re:First ever attempt at a song
« Reply #4 on: June 08, 2003, 11:38:27 AM »
nice shit dawg
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Re:First ever attempt at a song
« Reply #5 on: June 09, 2003, 01:29:54 AM »
yeah man its nice, i like it. like they said just turn yo voice up abit.
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Re:First ever attempt at a song
« Reply #6 on: June 09, 2003, 08:02:44 AM »
pretty dope.
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Re:First ever attempt at a song
« Reply #7 on: June 09, 2003, 11:41:53 AM »
Thanx for the feedback yo.. Really appriciate it..
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Re:First ever attempt at a song
« Reply #8 on: June 09, 2003, 01:28:10 PM »
Yo dogg, that shit was pretty dope  :o....Just bring the voice volume up a little...
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Re:First ever attempt at a song
« Reply #9 on: June 12, 2003, 03:04:48 PM »
Thats foir the feedback man.. there is anbother track on there now..
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Re:First ever attempt at a song
« Reply #10 on: June 12, 2003, 05:15:49 PM »
I aint gunna lie to you man but I didnt like the song at all.  Your voice makes you sound like your from the blazin squad and your basically talking over a beat, trying to fit to many words into 1 bar.  

The off the wall thing isn't to bad, its better than the song but overall truthfully I am going to say that i didnt feel it too much.  Keep trying tho mate I will peep everything u post up.  Practice makes perfect kiddah.
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Re:First ever attempt at a song
« Reply #11 on: June 13, 2003, 02:40:47 AM »
bez is the first one to tell u like it is lol ;D

basically what i told u on msn if how i feel ;)
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Re:First ever attempt at a song
« Reply #12 on: June 13, 2003, 04:22:10 AM »
I actually thought this was alright, after listening to it for a bit. Sounds a lot like the streets or blazin squad, and the flow is let down at times. I personnally however amnt a fan of that kind of "the streets" rappin so i wasnt hugely feeling this, but keep it up, it needs some work, but your going in the right direction
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Re:First ever attempt at a song
« Reply #13 on: June 13, 2003, 02:34:05 PM »
Quote from: Bez on June 12, 2003, 05:15:49 PM
I aint gunna lie to you man but I didnt like the song at all.  Your voice makes you sound like your from the blazin squad and your basically talking over a beat, trying to fit to many words into 1 bar.  

that must have been the most offensive thing ive heard.. LOL

Nahh its cool people (ITW & Bez).. Thanks for the feedback.. The problem is... I was rappin that slow n quietly to  get feelin into the song... and if i do rap normal speed in my accent im going to soun like blazin squad or the streets coz i am british.. ya feel me?
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