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fucked up love
« on: June 23, 2005, 01:12:55 AM »
i cant pluck up my courage to look into your eyez
i cant interrogate my knowledge to give maself advice
my entire world i built so strong is burnin up in fire
Id hate ya but like an annoyin song s sayin its only desire
i used to think id leave you, throw you away n cross you out
but i can forgive you, say its okay n laugh so loud
its like nuthins on my mind, at the same time ive to say a lot
this time im able to trust n forgive, but next time to kill-I swear to God!
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Re: fucked up love
« Reply #1 on: July 05, 2005, 12:44:03 PM »
this is cool poem type..i liked the second line..
kinda offended when you swear to god...i don't swear..but since it's ya thing..it's kew..
keep it up
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*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc

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Re: fucked up love
« Reply #2 on: July 05, 2005, 01:13:11 PM »
thanx,man, can understand whatcha mean with da swear to god, but its just the expression of my feelings i had in this situation, ya know...maybe i wouldnt really swaer in real life...thanx for yo feedback
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Re: fucked up love
« Reply #3 on: July 08, 2005, 02:45:11 AM »
yeh the second line was ill, keep it up

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Re: fucked up love
« Reply #4 on: July 08, 2005, 09:36:09 AM »
thanx man, i appreciate it!

"give me a pen, a pad n a mic n im free.."  ;)
« Last Edit: July 08, 2005, 09:37:53 AM by Zet »
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Re: fucked up love
« Reply #5 on: July 08, 2005, 11:55:39 AM »
das mich jemand mal zitiert hätt ich auch nie gedacht  ;D
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Re: fucked up love
« Reply #6 on: July 09, 2005, 08:35:08 AM »
Quote from: 'Illicit' on July 08, 2005, 11:55:39 AM
das mich jemand mal zitiert hätt ich auch nie gedacht  ;D

tja es geschehen noch zeichen und wunder  ;)
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Re: fucked up love
« Reply #7 on: August 18, 2005, 01:51:45 PM »
see i can talk gibberish too
ajsjsjdhdhdh:)

hi illicit and the poem was nice man
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Re: fucked up love
« Reply #8 on: August 25, 2005, 04:41:11 AM »
heyyy its german  :)

but thnx for feedback
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Re: fucked up love
« Reply #9 on: August 25, 2005, 11:38:40 AM »
Quote from: 'Illicit' on July 08, 2005, 11:55:39 AM
das mich jemand mal zitiert hätt ich auch nie gedacht  ;D

dich gibts auch noch? ich werde nostalgisch hier...
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Re: fucked up love
« Reply #10 on: August 26, 2005, 11:26:08 AM »
Quote from: Sonic Kill on August 25, 2005, 11:38:40 AM
Quote from: 'Illicit' on July 08, 2005, 11:55:39 AM
das mich jemand mal zitiert hätt ich auch nie gedacht  ;D

dich gibts auch noch? ich werde nostalgisch hier...

ab und an schon. kann die finger eben doch nicht vom board lassen  8)
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Re: fucked up love
« Reply #11 on: August 30, 2005, 03:26:36 PM »
its real.. its deep.. its a good piece in my opinion... i really like how you worded it all.. turned out good.
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Re: fucked up love
« Reply #12 on: September 04, 2005, 01:54:05 AM »
Quote from: 'Illicit' on July 08, 2005, 02:45:11 AM
yeh the second line was ill, keep it up


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Re: fucked up love
« Reply #13 on: September 09, 2005, 12:05:34 PM »
 :-*
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