fucked up love

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

i cant pluck up my courage to look into your eyez
i cant interrogate my knowledge to give maself advice
my entire world i built so strong is burnin up in fire
Id hate ya but like an annoyin song s sayin its only desire
i used to think id leave you, throw you away n cross you out
but i can forgive you, say its okay n laugh so loud
its like nuthins on my mind, at the same time ive to say a lot
this time im able to trust n forgive, but next time to kill-I swear to God!

[Mr. O]

this is cool poem type..i liked the second line..
kinda offended when you swear to god...i don't swear..but since it's ya thing..it's kew..
keep it up

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

thanx,man, can understand whatcha mean with da swear to god, but its just the expression of my feelings i had in this situation, ya know...maybe i wouldnt really swaer in real life...thanx for yo feedback

['Illicit']

yeh the second line was ill, keep it up

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

thanx man, i appreciate it!

"give me a pen, a pad n a mic n im free.." 

['Illicit']

das mich jemand mal zitiert hätt ich auch nie gedacht 

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

das mich jemand mal zitiert hätt ich auch nie gedacht 

tja es geschehen noch zeichen und wunder 

[Miss NWA Whoorider]

see i can talk gibberish too
ajsjsjdhdhdh:)

hi illicit and the poem was nice man

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

heyyy its german 

but thnx for feedback

[Kill]

das mich jemand mal zitiert hätt ich auch nie gedacht 

dich gibts auch noch? ich werde nostalgisch hier...

['Illicit']

das mich jemand mal zitiert hätt ich auch nie gedacht 

dich gibts auch noch? ich werde nostalgisch hier...

ab und an schon. kann die finger eben doch nicht vom board lassen 

[hope glimmers]

its real.. its deep.. its a good piece in my opinion... i really like how you worded it all.. turned out good.

[G funker]

yeh the second line was ill, keep it up

 

[g unot]