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Mac 10 †:

--- Quote from: Dynamic on January 13, 2006, 12:42:37 PM ---HAA dmx nigga u wack, that was the wackest verse i ever seen in my LIFE, All these cats kno, u jus a fake ass mufuka wit throw-way simplistic rhymes. im bouts to RIP this nigga.

When im Slammin you ill be makin the the Whole Planet Move
laugh as the crowd watchs me manhandle and Dismantle You
Thats what u get for thinkin an' Planning That Dynamic Lose
leave you lookin like a Left handed man usin a Right-handed Tool
An when u Go back Broken an Bruised and lie to ur Fans and Crew
they all Gunna Sceptically Examine You and they gunna Demand the Proof
An ill show them the K.O. an how i Land it too in every Camera View
Leave You to Rot, like those skinny Ethiopians Goin through a Famine Do
Lock u in a Panic-room and under the bandaged-wounds watch the Maggots Chew
The room so Stank i Puke, leave ur Decaying carcass smellin like Salmon Stu,
I'll Erupt Spittin Volcanic Ooze, Cremate ur Body to Nothin but Sand and Fumes

GEA.. say somethin'

DYNAMIC

--- End quote ---

maybe try switchin it up a bit mayne

same sounding rhymes the whole time got pretty tired  :-\

keep trying tho  ;)

'Illicit':
^^^whose that fine ass woman???

@ dmx:  wadnt too bad bein that u only been rhymin in english for 3 weeks.  but yeh u definately need sum work homie.  what part of germany u from?

da_notorious_mack:
cheryl tweedy..... :o

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