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My first post in this section! (a diss)
D--M--X:
Rapping in English is a lil bit difficult for me, cause i'm from Germany I also don't rap long, just since about 3weeks
Thanks for the advice, I'm gonna use it in the future :)
Dynamic:
HAA dmx nigga u wack, that was the wackest verse i ever seen in my LIFE, All these cats kno, u jus a fake ass mufuka wit throw-way simplistic rhymes. im bouts to RIP this nigga.
When im Slammin you ill be makin the the Whole Planet Move
laugh as the crowd watchs me manhandle and Dismantle You
Thats what u get for thinkin an' Planning That Dynamic Lose
leave you lookin like a Left handed man usin a Right-handed Tool
An when u Go back Broken an Bruised and lie to ur Fans and Crew
they all Gunna Sceptically Examine You and they gunna Demand the Proof
An ill show them the K.O. an how i Land it too in every Camera View
Leave You to Rot, like those skinny Ethiopians Goin through a Famine Do
Lock u in a Panic-room and under the bandaged-wounds watch the Maggots Chew
The room so Stank i Puke, leave ur Decaying carcass smellin like Salmon Stu,
I'll Erupt Spittin Volcanic Ooze, Cremate ur Body to Nothin but Sand and Fumes
GEA.. say somethin'
DYNAMIC
D--M--X:
--- Quote from: Dynamic on January 13, 2006, 12:42:37 PM ---HAA dmx nigga u wack, that was the wackest verse i ever seen in my LIFE, All these cats kno, u jus a fake ass mufuka wit throw-way simplistic rhymes. im bouts to RIP this nigga.
When im Slammin you ill be makin the the Whole Planet Move
laugh as the crowd watchs me manhandle and Dismantle You
Thats what u get for thinkin an' Planning That Dynamic Lose
leave you lookin like a Left handed man usin a Right-handed Tool
An when u Go back Broken an Bruised and lie to ur Fans and Crew
they all Gunna Sceptically Examine You and they gunna Demand the Proof
An ill show them the K.O. an how i Land it too in every Camera View
Leave You to Rot, like those skinny Ethiopians Goin through a Famine Do
Lock u in a Panic-room and under the bandaged-wounds watch the Maggots Chew
The room so Stank i Puke, leave ur Decaying carcass smellin like Salmon Stu,
I'll Erupt Spittin Volcanic Ooze, Cremate ur Body to Nothin but Sand and Fumes
GEA.. say somethin'
DYNAMIC
--- End quote ---
Whoaa, adynamic cool down, there's no reason to drop sth like that.
I didn't say that I'm good or anything, it ain't easy rhyming in another language.
Bet you can't speak 3 languages, can you???
Also i'm only rapping since only 3weeks!!!
So search sb who's your size
da_notorious_mack:
--- Quote from: Dynamic on January 13, 2006, 12:42:37 PM ---HAA dmx nigga u wack, that was the wackest verse i ever seen in my LIFE, All these cats kno, u jus a fake ass mufuka wit throw-way simplistic rhymes. im bouts to RIP this nigga.
When im Slammin you ill be makin the the Whole Planet Move
laugh as the crowd watchs me manhandle and Dismantle You
Thats what u get for thinkin an' Planning That Dynamic Lose
leave you lookin like a Left handed man usin a Right-handed Tool
An when u Go back Broken an Bruised and lie to ur Fans and Crew
they all Gunna Sceptically Examine You and they gunna Demand the Proof
An ill show them the K.O. an how i Land it too in every Camera View
Leave You to Rot, like those skinny Ethiopians Goin through a Famine Do
Lock u in a Panic-room and under the bandaged-wounds watch the Maggots Chew
The room so Stank i Puke, leave ur Decaying carcass smellin like Salmon Stu,
I'll Erupt Spittin Volcanic Ooze, Cremate ur Body to Nothin but Sand and Fumes
GEA.. say somethin'
DYNAMIC
--- End quote ---
dayum...dun u murderous...hit me up on pm if ya wanna hit a site wit sum competition....
o yah...dmx....werent really feeln this....wayyyyyyyyyy too simple...try usin multis like....
pay-stacks
lace-raps
stay-strapped
take-that
see wat i mean...keep at it though...youll improve....
D--M--X:
Thanks for the advice, i'll use it
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